request

[rubberbutton]

So I've got about 15k of Ray/Ray that I've been sitting on awhile. I've been staring at it so long, I've lost whatever perspective I had -- can't see the forest because all those damn trees are in the way.

Does anybody feel like reading over it and giving macro concrit, especially wrt pacing, plot and characterization? The prose could use work too, but I don't want to polish a scene that's going to be cut later.

Any takers? You can be rough as you like. ;)

Comments

[healingmirth]

I'd be happy to read through it if you still need someone. And I've just realized that I never made it back to crit your original fic *embarassed* so let me know if you still want feedback on that too?

[rubberbutton]

*pounces* Oh, would you? That would be marvelous! Do I have your email? Hmm, I don't think so. My address is rb.lurks at gmail.com.

Nah, don't worry about the original fic.