This is a great premise and you really did the most of it. The characterizations were spot on, and the tender love scene was very hot! Also that last part was absolutely one of the best "Arthur finds out" scenes I've read. It rang so true to me. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2009-02-10 02:59 pm (UTC)