God. First few paragraphs and I was already paralyzed with fear. Arthur's situation, being concussed and blind? That has actually happened to me. It is awful. It is so. fucking. scary. I flipped out and for a second was a little upset that Arthur didn't. But he wouldn't, now would he? And that is what makes you very, very brilliant.
You had me laughing aloud with the pixiewort bit. Ah, Gaius. What a character.
I love Morgana's role in this. Seems she gets neglected as a character in fanfiction, but you've got her spot-on, especially when she tries to defend Merlin. Speaking of, the poor babe. I hope he gets what he deserves next chapter.
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Date: 2009-02-13 11:44 pm (UTC)You had me laughing aloud with the pixiewort bit. Ah, Gaius. What a character.
I love Morgana's role in this. Seems she gets neglected as a character in fanfiction, but you've got her spot-on, especially when she tries to defend Merlin. Speaking of, the poor babe. I hope he gets what he deserves next chapter.
<3 Amazing job, dollface.