I was just telling ignazwisdom how much I've come to appreciate well written first time stories. And here the universe sends one knocking on my door!
Mmmmm. Funny, and good real-sounding dialogue - plus nice characterisation, particularly on Ray's hunches/Fraser's second-nature powers of observation.
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Date: 2007-09-12 03:17 am (UTC)Mmmmm. Funny, and good real-sounding dialogue - plus nice characterisation, particularly on Ray's hunches/Fraser's second-nature powers of observation.