Mm. My favorite chapter, and not just for the kiss and bedroom scenes, but also for the pain in House's sudden shout of "Nothing is going to make this easier" and the strip-club epiphany, and now the Wilson-goes-home scene too, which is an interesting take on his relationship with his family (has only been home three times in the last, what, ten years?) and hesitance to share the bad news (probably had trouble announcing the divorces as well).
Not to be nitpicky at this stage of the game, but in that section, He watched as Wilson picked up two nearly identical ties holding first one up against a shirt and then the other could use a comma after "ties." Same down here after "back" in Wilson shifted, rolling onto his back and caught House’s mouth with his own.
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Date: 2007-02-11 02:58 pm (UTC)Not to be nitpicky at this stage of the game, but in that section, He watched as Wilson picked up two nearly identical ties holding first one up against a shirt and then the other could use a comma after "ties." Same down here after "back" in Wilson shifted, rolling onto his back and caught House’s mouth with his own.